Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Rewording ClimateChangeinAustralia Part 1

Original:

"About half of all tornadoes in Australia occur during May to October."
(page 23)

My recommended rewording:

"About half of all tornadoes in Australia occur during May to October, as do almost half the months of the year"

1 comment:

Ralph said...

Classic! Keep up the good work.